Bonjour, pourriez-vous m'aider au niveau de l'orthographe et de la conjugaison de mon texte s'il vous plait? Merci pour vos réponses. I’m going to talk about the notion idea of progress.The idea of progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change, a technical, scientific or social advance which contibues to making the world a better place but in my notion i prefere to speak of the medical progress and more precisely the eugenics but also the social progress with the women. What are the two mains progress in the United states ? So, firstly we will see the point positive in the eugenics progress and in the secondly we will see the equality of the women and the man The eugenics is By definition the belief into the possibility of improving the qualities of the human species, in selecting genes to create a perfect man. Study of human improvement by genetic means. The American Eugenics society, founded in 1926, supported Galton’s theories. U.S eugenicist also supported restriction on immigration from nations with inferior stock,such as italy,greece, and countries of eastern europe, and argued for the sterilization of insane,retarded and epileptic citizen.But the medical progress have all point negative. For example in class we have talks about Brave New world written in 1932 by Aldous Huxley. In this film the director is leading a group on a tour of the facilities. He presents it like a production factory and introduces his new scientific breakthrough to the newly arrived students. He seems very powerful and proud of what he has succeeded in creting. He is convinced that he is serving a great cause and no one dares doubt him. This mass production of human beings is obviously leading to uniformity and the release of clones that are considered a product deprived of individuality. The fertilizers obey the director who manipulates life and treats human beings like slaves or robots, seeing them only as a potential, cheap labour force. On the one hand, it helps improve the quality of the embryos. On the other hand, it also wipes out all identity and creates impersonal and dehumanized people who are all similar to each other. Sciences bows down to the wish for a perfect human being, but to some extent, we should remain critical of scientific progress, as it can also crush all forms of diversity. In a way, although science can be a benefit, it can also prove to be a burden. So the medical progress was important but they can many drift. Before the women was victim that the discrimination than the men. This discrimination was always present in the different field. There is in the work place, in the politics, or at home. For illustrate this discrimination in class we can studing on the film Made in Dagenham, this film is about the working class women who organize a strike in oder to get an equal paid and this action led to the advant of the equal paid act. The women was determinate to obtain the equality. Whilst inequality between men and women continues today in the UK, it’s incomparable to the scale elsewhere in the world. For lower this inequality the government put in place many laws for example The right to be safe from domestic violence because 10 and 69 per cent of the women report abuse by their intimitate partnaire and the women are the focus of many rape who destroy their life, The right to have quality maternal health care because 536 000women die of pregnecy-related,The right to equal pay because a women who work like a man must be pay like him,The right to education because 776 millions illiterates are women and the right to hold public office because only 19 per cent of members of parliament accros the world are women. So the dicrimination was more important than before. In conclusion we can say that the two major progress in the united states it’s located on the medical field with the eugenism but also in the social field with the equatity between men and women which evolved more.
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